Self-Editing for Fiction Writers, Second Edition (2010)
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Bring a scene you’ve already written. Browne and King’s chapters on dialogue and beats help you see what the gestures between speeches are doing. Try taking out the ones that break up the conversation without changing its meaning, then see which pauses you miss. This is especially handy when a draft has plenty of dialogue but feels slow.
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